Any tips?

Give a brief summary of what the entire press release is about in the first paragraph. Then, elaborate as you go. Press people receive so many releases, that they don't even read a lot of them if they aren't attention-grabbing from the get go. Try to come up with a catchy spin on things. Remember to touch on: Who, What, When, Where, Why.

Hope that helps.

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